a midnight prayer

teers of icy sorrow a Stoney heart faded black 

corrupted by my demons because I've sobcomed to their  attack 

my gaze to the heavens I fall on calloused knees 

Begging forgiveness God help me please 

the stuggle within a fight so long fought

is it to late for my soul I pray to god not

to long have thees deemens torn into my hart 

thretend my sanaty and ripped me apart

though few people know the jolly person they see

is a liy to them and mabby even to me 

i laugh so often just so i wont screem

i whish i could be the person i seem 

not the beast i unleash only when im alone 

why cant i change this person who to only me is known 

the beast remains hidden and so shall it be

until i can acsept or change this darker side of me

Reviews

[ZoZo's mommy]

wow babby thats realy deep

[Tina Kline]

Very dark and rather chilling. I imagine someone battling with a horrible choking depression or perhaps this is not meant to be personal then I'd see it as someone struggling with their inner beast, say a werewolf. Either way this is done very well in its expression of the battle with personal darkness.

[Fran Marie]

A very dark and well crafted poem~ nicely donE!!

[Kesha]

Very dark but that's what I love! Amazing as always! :)

[HorrorMaster]

very deep and dark. I like this one.

[Mercury Mirrors]

Wow...deep. And dark. I like it >:D Everybody has a dark side, unfortunately, mine is incredibly bitchy. ^^ Very good poem though. It's good to find somceone else on here who knows how to rhyme well.