Darkened Soul

a little dark..

In my darkest days, I held you beneath my warmth

You indulged me with your feverish hunger

You embraced me with your piercing emotions

You were immune to my changeable disease

I came to a realization that you were my muse

              The best rainbow I received……….

You told me that I was part of your soul

            To me you’re the fuel to my rusty engine,

                                     The energy to my thirsty being,

                         And the light of my darkened soul.

Author's Note

i don't know what to say...
would you share your thoughts about it?

Reviews

[Mia]

This is wonderful! I love the ending!
"The energy to my thirsty being,
And the light of my darken soul."
It is very evident that there is passion in this relationship and it's the kind of passion that just engulfs you. The kind of passion that’s dangerous but you just can't help yourself. Really great write!

[Pax]

You got it! that was the purpose and the dark side of it. Somewhat a dangerous love affair. Thank you my friend.

[Mia]

It's such a pleasure!

[Shep]

You are quite the romantic. Nicely done

[Lonely Islander]

This was a little bubble of warm emotions that burst too easily to make its reader feel the love..this wasxwonderful and packed full of passion..simply loved it:-):-):-D.

[Pax]

thank you so much my friend... I'm glad you enjoyed this little booklet of mine...

[Lonely Islander]

:-):-):-D.

[Lost in Wonderland]

This was so beautiful. I felt the love, the stronf, ferevnt emtions run through me with warmth as I read this. Very nice job:)
God Bless

[Pax]

thanks my friend...*big smiles* im glad you felt the emotion in it...

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem at all :D

[Kerri Hart]

the poem seemed to surroud me while i was reading
feeding me emotions and images like drugs
what a write!

[Pax]

*smiles* thank you...

[Kerri Hart]

Hahahah no problem

[Barbara Walker]

This is a very beautiful tribute to someone who has touched you deeply. Well done!

[RachelReaper]

Yes, i will certainly share my thoughts on it, but first, I must ask... you did share this with the person you are writing about, didn't you? Because this poem is filled with so much emotion, and so much deep passion that I could envision everything you felt, this poem is truly spectacular.

[Pax]

i wish she did, but it's all in the past now...i just reflected on it..Thank You..

[Muse]

You were immune to my changeable disease

Wow..you pack a powerful punch with so little words. Dark...evocative, and brilliant!

[Pencrafter]

Does this mean you like the person? Just kidding. That's a pretty font you used, making it feel like a personal letter.

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This is very introspective, Willyam. I love the relationship you have between yourself and your soul, and how you reflect on how crucial it is for you. Great job, dear friend.