Life’s trouble

a 7 word poem....

The exit

to

Life’s trouble

is

Patience

Author's Note

share your thoughts my friends...

i need alot of patience right now....

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Wow! In just 7 words you made a perfect quote.

I agree. It's not easy to get away with life's trouble. It needs more time...and more patience.

So I should tell it to myself, too. Patience...

Nice one. Sort of self-reflection. Thanks for this, Pax. :)

[Pax]

thanks Dhaye.... i need it more of this now... stretching to the limit... :)

[Dhaye]

You're welcome. :)

[gem]

I agreed... Patience is a virtue.

[Pax]

Salamat kabayan!

[.]

Beautifully done:)

[Pax]

thank you Mr. Cord, its a pleasure to hear from you..

[Mia]

You always say such sagacious things, it’s an indication that you have really lived. So much trouble can be spared by patience. 'Good things come to those who wait'. Thank you for always sharing your wisdom with us!

[Pax]

sagacious ..wow a new word for me...thank you so much..

[Mia]

It means you have a profound understanding of the world partnered with good judgment :) You're very welcome my friend!

[captain]

this is like the answer to my problems, thinking I've rushed my work to quickly like everything I do because I thought I was better under pressure. Brilliant!

[Pax]

thank you captain for visiting and reviewing.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's a fortune cookie! Great poem! I want to write fortune cookies but I want to write stuff like "IN COMING!!!" or "Pull the trigger" What would you do if you opened a fortune cookie after a big meal and the fortune said "HIT THE DECK!!!" The mind ponders...

[Pax]

fortune cookie..i like that....hmm...my mind would really ponder on that...thanks my friend.

[afra]

Wow ..ilove it ....its so true

[Pax]

thank you..

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your poem. I use patience and be quiet. Some folks want to argue. I do my best and be quiet. A lot of less problems in my life because of patience and silence. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Pax]

thank you, I'm glad you find it insightful...

[FJ Davis]

Might be more a way through, than an exit--but a valid observation nonetheless.
Excellent perception, Will!

[Pax]

thank you Mr. frank..i think so too...its much more than that...but it was what i thought out of the blue or out of nowhere inside my head...I really appreciate you opinion Mr. Frank..

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Everybody wants life to happen in an instant, unaware of the consequences. Splendid!

[Pax]

you understand it more than me..

[Pax]

thanks my friend.