Emptied Me

just expressing...

 

 

I’m getting (greedy)………

Don’t want this (feeling)………..

I feel_everything……….

 The (selfishness)…………

The (lonesomeness)………….

The (stubbornness)…………

The (uneasiness)…………

The (emptiness) till (nothingness)………..

>>>>>>>>>> of all this mixture of emotions………….

____________________ just another day inside my head has end!

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Author's Note

the stars are meant for hope... that there will always a light that will shines behind every darkness you've felt...

I felt those from time to time...

Reviews

[Lonely Islander]

You have a beautiful way of expressing your feelings dear Pax. And when you do that, the reader gets stucked into your writing. Keep doing this Pax, don't bother about stupid grammar stuff. Looking forward to your amazing pieces:-):-):-D.

[Pax]

My dear friend thank you so much. Those feelings are hard to handle at times but i can manage.... I'm glad that you liked my writings that means so much to me.

[Frieda P]

This is so direct and leaves a lasting impression, potent punch. Very nicely done...

[Pax]

:) thank you ms. F
i hope i didn't give you a black eye.. lol
glad you like it.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so original and beautifully expressed, dear Pax! I loved the way you put words in brackets, as if they are closed inside of you...I just feel that, and so many emotion could mix in us every day, but the dark emotions are always temporaty, before the light comes!
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[Pax]

oh dear friend you are so lovely... thank you so much...
yes, i put the bracket to stress the feelings i have in a brief moments.. making them really close to me...and yes darkness is temporary.. like the song lyrics i like very much: it's always darkess before the dawn...

[Sami Khalil]

You are an honest writer and that is a good trait for some people like to hide their feelings and not share it which is unhealthy . We need to express them and move on to bigger and better things in life for life is short...Another of your brilliant works.

[Pax]

i agree... your insight is absorb.. :) and i feel it... writing is my therapy an its a great great help... thank you so much dear friend...

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling ...You are welcome.

[Tai Ryens]

I've found this a great deal of a combination consisting of both whispers and screams; all begging to be let go, but unable and terrified to. Fine poem indeed.

[Pax]

thanks Tai... interpretation is refreshing... I really appreciate that...

[Tarry Franck]

Very well done - Great emotion you've uncovered that we all feel but sometimes seem to hide for fear that it will show our weaknesses. Great write though. Really enjoyed the way you wrote it :)

[Pax]

thanks my friend...showing our weakness is not a weakness but a understanding that you know your weakness and trying to overcome it that makes you strong... right...thanks again for coming by...

[Tarry Franck]

You are very right :) I see your point of view :)

[Marie]

A whole mixture of emotions can make one empty...but hope should begin each new day...

[Pax]

yes, i agree... thank you my friend.

[Corset]

A wide range of very human emotions, I imagine we all feel all day just as you, I know I do at times. Though I would never want that for you it is good to know there are others who can still feel completely all the emotions that make us real, and the hopeful stars beneath them too! xxx

[Pax]

thanks my friend... we feel it at times... writing it makes me realize that...
I really appreciate you coming by...
always take care and be well as well...:D

[Corset]

you too :)

[Lover Of Words]

Very well exspessed Pax!!

[Pax]

thank you my friend...