Desperate Taking

~ an opening poem for the next chapter...

 

Encompassing

I ‘am falling into the arms of being alive

 

Can be lust, be love

 ?

 

Is desire heading to the road of love

?

 

Seems like I forgot

-

“How to love”

Mixing fire and desire

Is not a friendly match

Sacred Vows or Broken Homes

is not my thing

Seeing the lady of my thoughts

Give me a hammer to break rules

Ruining symbols of love

 

My affectionate emotion

Broke down into tiny piece

As I beg for your body

Then it all comes into a

desperate taking

pushing every boundary

every limit

and pulling-out every defense

until you submit to my savage need

and you follow your own indulging passion

to me

*

Author's Note

a poem partly based on Bone's thoughts in my Book Every little thing

this poem comes after the chapter Climatic Pleasure.. to be compiled later...
still on the process on making the next chapter... hoping i don't run out of muses...
the pictures really help... ;) so I'm stretching my patience not to rush anything... even this poem... made it yesterday publish today.. :D
enjoy :)

Reviews

[Androglossia]

I think love and lust coexist in a way. I've said this to a friend on here and I'm saying it again. For me, love is a mental state growing within our minds which resides in our body, looking after physiological functions of our body including all our instinctive and intuitive desires. Sex too is a natural and instinctive desire of our body. Any function in which the mind is involved, body can't remain indifferent to it. Thus for me, love and lust are mutually co-generative and co-existing. But then I could be wrong. This is a very intelligent write, kabayan. And yeah, the photo is awesome:)

[Pax]

smiling.... "intelligent" ~ why can't i still accept that word to my system... for I am always a slow learner... a slow poke... a certain teacher proves that to me... well i guess I'm too negative on myself because of that...so i never am an achiever just the fool in the corner... dearly Maryanne... thank you...

with you insight... i highly appreciate that... and i can maybe say... we are all animals... we do sex as part of our lives... sex is there always... sex is how we act on how we like or love someone.... lust is a craving... and can be a longing for something for far too long right... so i think i could say love and lust are somehow connected... like in my second question "is desire heading to the road of love?" so lust and desire can build a bridge to cross over to love... :)
grateful with your insight kabayan!

[Androglossia]

Right on! Oh you can't always blame yourself for going through such experience. It happened to make you a batter person. Wise and experienced.

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

What can I say? I'm speechless for the most part.

The general idea is entertaining.

And uhmm... O.O

Nice write

[Belle]

"Seeing the lady of my thoughts
Give me a hammer to break rules
Ruining symbols of love"

When desire reaches the highest peak and flares out of control, it turns out to be lustful desire that can bring out the demon in a man...Paxie, this is out of convention, but I know this is only part of your poetic journey so I am still on your side. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Good piece. I liked the Seems I forgot how to love mixing fire and desire stanza best.

[Tree]

There is authority in unrelenting passion. When love refuses to give in. I really enjoyed this Pax. I remember that kind of fire. There is no higher high than when love and desire are at its peak And no lower low then when it's gone. In the second verse: ''I ‘am falling into the arms of being alive'' you set the tone. I will remember that line for a long time. There was power in this piece, Pax.

[Marie]

Love should come before desire, but it doesn't. Desire seems to blot out everything, and when it's done, we may be left with nothing.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

It is a dynamic piece, love the way you expressed every words.

this my fave:

“How to love”

Mixing fire and desire

Is not a friendly match

Sacred Vows & Broken Homes

is not my thing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just lust? never seems to have a good ending...think you meant "give me a hammer to break rules"

but yes, this is good..we let passion get away with us..and sometimes broken homes happen...came close to that once...glad we never went through with it..it never became more than a thought.
really like "falling into the arms of being alive."

nice line...really wicked poem.

jacob

[Pax]

ps...opts... thanks for the correcting my tenses error mr. Jacob...

[Ruth]

Surrendered and delivered with outstanding intensity! xox