Restlessness

Restlessness makes my nights sleepless

Overloaded thoughts make my lights stranded

 

My mirrored reflection affects my emotion

Finding the old me, now lost in the sea, never ending

Waves that never cease my ease, bewildering

 

Kisses pushes me to the dark,, hugs causes me to bark

Stars from far above filled this emptied love

 

Voices Rant, faceless haunt, memories taunt

Goodbyes are beginning, the ends are starting

Author's Note

~ Fragments of my soul are scattered in my verses
* I flunk!
* Poetry is therapy
* Questionable Mentality
* Restlessness

Sometimes I thought that it's just word-play but then there is always truth hides in little fragments of what i felt when i wrote it. There is always this feel that i have release something in every write i wrote, I guess that's just how i write...

Enjoy the read my friends ~
I'll be around soon ~

Reviews

[gabrielle]

"Finding the old me, now lost in the sea"
I can relate on the above line. and i would usually dwell on the thought of my old "me" whenever i'm burdened with responsibilities. i would think that, when i was younger i used to be carefree, stress-free and so on... but those were the days...

"Kisses pushes me to the dark,, hugs causes me to bark" you'll turn into grumpy old man if you keep on doing this. lol.

the rhythm of this piece is spectacular Kabayan. =)

[Pax]

those were the days, hoping that we could relive...change something or just stop time and relive those happy moments... but what had passed is now history... i guess im on the process of acceptance with all this heavy baggage i carry on my own, with my own choice... so in time i will be able to free myself with this...

haha ~ parang nahawa ka na talaga sa lola natin... you made me smile Gab.... even though we know that the poem has a sad feel, you still see humor in it :) ~ that's great to make a friend smile....thank you very much...