In the midst of your silence

In the midst of your silence

I breathe the unbearable feeling

you're not into me

anymore...

In the midst of this awful feelings

I cringe of the thought

you'll fallout of love...

And in the midst of all my doubts

I became the fool

with so little trust,

jealousy blinded me...

In the end, I didn't 

 find security 

in your embrace.

- pax

Author's Note

Note:
starting to post some of my writing in the quarantine period, annoying but its a must for our safety. stay safe everyone.

Trust is one thing in a relationship but making your partner secured of what realness you both have is important as well.

Reviews

[Corset]

Domestic abuse tripled during quarantine months at the property I worked at the time covid19 became and was worse than that by the time I left that business. There is not enough money in the world to make me witness again repeatedly what I witnessed then. It must be impossible to endure 24-7 of a person you do not truly love, trust, or respect.

[Chris Shaw]

That moment when the penny drops can be so painful. You know it's happening and you want it to stop, but it doesn't. You conveyed your feelings well here Pax. First of yours I have read.

Chris

[Jimmy Yetts]

As you say--in the end--whatever the reason, you didn't find security in her embrace.
Says it all, Pax.
Good read!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we often become the fools without realizing we are in the midst of doing that.
Third line and seventh line need very slight editing.
But i really like the theme, the layout with the short rhythmic lines.