BodY foR HirE

This Job feeds me
This gives my everyday needs
This gives lust, desire, passion
                and everything pleasurable.
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These Lips touches so many lives
This Body reaches so many heights
my Life had passed so many challenges
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This Heart is empty all the time
This Soul has been alone all along
my Life was only for me along time ago.

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Author's Note

Edited for error 3.

Reviews

[Gene Hiccup]

hey, your poem's content is a painful truth in some people's life...through
the three last line of your poem:
This Heart is empty all the time
This Soul has been alone all along
my Life is only for me along time ago.
i have felt the hopelessness and misery by people who have this kind of job.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

So very sad that someone would have to live this way.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is direct and honest. Some people had little option. I been to many places in this world and I saw how some places woman must do what is necessary to survive. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Wondering Mind]

It is difficult for me to imagine what actually goes through the minds of those who let the body in return for money, but I think you've come close to what I think is correct.

[Cathy Wattam]

Interesting write. So true to be surrounded by so many but feel utterly alone.

A couple of errors:-
"This lips touches so many lives" - I feel should say "These lips"
"This soul is been alone all along" - should be "This soul has been"

Apart from those, I enjoyed this thanks.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Hmm......nicely expressed. it actualy shows the real plight of those people...

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Hmm......nicely expressed. it actualy shows the real plight of those people...

[BikerAngie]

The life of prostitution is such a lonely life. to be surrounded and touched by so many yet not to feel the warmth of the human connection of true feelings. powerful write