Heart isn't Alone

Heart is blind without the mind to imagine
Yet the Heart is alive and it beats that speaks our soul
Heart does not function alone
But it's the Center of it all.

Our mind unites the five senses
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The mind process what it hears
The mind creates what it sees
The mind evaluates what it smells
The mind appraises what it tastes
The mind senses whatever the body touches
The mind is only a machine without its core.
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Heart and Mind connect
Because it's the most important to protect
It's a bond that is part of us ever since we were born
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                                               It beats our fear
                                               It beats our pain
                                               It beats our sorrow
Our heart is our soul              It beats our excitement
Where emotions are stored   It beats our pleasure
                                               It beats our passion
                                               It beats our love
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It speaks in silence
The mind only speaks what the heart tells
They communicate with a language that is unknown

The mind is neither good nor evil
But the heart is capable of being good or evil
The heart is capable of anything that speaks our nature
Even if your heart is dark as the darkest night
Another heart will give flame to start a light
A flame that will serve as light in your darkest night

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I believe this to be true...Our hearts can feel many things... it is what makes us who we are. Lovely write!


" It beats our fear
It beats our pain
It beats our sorrow
"Our heart is our soul It beats our excitement
Where emotions are stored" It beats our pleasure
It beats our passion
It beats our love"

[JadeForever]

Well done! I like the unique format and the vocab in the poem. Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

-Jade

[khalid]

i liked the shape and content, i see it as unique and new style for me

[An owl on the moon]

This stuns on so many levels... a striking look into our being.. our existence... the elements that make us human and define us... roles and responsibilities... You both build and tear down, and let the light of life flood every line.

[Pritesh]

What a fab poetic definition of heart.After reading this heart would as well envisage to become a poet.your commencement just blown everything.Great scientific poem:-)

[eeoopig]

Wow, this was really nice :) Good job it was really beautiful and true in so many ways. The message is repeated through out the whole poem, making it so strong. Once again, good job!

[Monica-Antoinetta-Magda..]

this is so honest and beautiful, I love the repetition you use..it adds so much strength to your poem. this is a very enteraining and lovely read. keep it up! (:

[Kaya]

The repitition and structure here is so powerful and well thought out... I really enjoyed reading this... its written quite cleverly

[Siena - Silent Awakenin..]

Whoa, your repetition is so strong! This really helps the reader to paint your picture, clearly and effectively.
The layout is also very interesting, it reminded me of the different sections/organs of the heart, and brain. haha idk, i think thats a good thing.
Umm, The rhyme at the end summed it all up and i congratilate you in creating a great poem! Keep writing.
¬ Siena

[Leslie Philibert]

What I like here is not only the original structure, but the ideas behind the lines.
Like the force and power of the mind verse, good writing.