I breathe

just deleted some..and edited it..

I breathe the life you give me

I stumble on life’s expectations,

                              each disappointment,

                                      and in every loneliness I suffer.

Sometimes I just wish

I should have not accepted the life you given me

Yet, I know it was meant to be

Some things are constant and never changing

It keeps on heading forward

The past remained in it's place

So, I wait

Wait till the end

As long as I hold into

The memory of you

The memories of joys, fights, funny moments and love

                             will keep me contented in the days of my life.

Author's Note

when i wrote this i felt the sadness of the man to his dead wife..
this is very sad....
we may forget how it feels but the memories remains in our hearts and mind
reminding us that its always there never fading.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"The memories of joys, fights, funny moments and love
will keep me contented in the days of my life."
Sometime the bad memories become less painful with age. I like the strong description leading to a amazing ending. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[....]

wow ~ such sadness, i never forget the past and the hurt. somehow we can forgive, sometimes we can't

[Laura Maidah]

It's lovely, really. I don't find that the font helps me read, though. I copied it and made it default. Lol.

[Gene Hiccup]

this poems seems like an struggle of a person about the plans made by God for him.

[Layla J Omorose]

It is sad but a beautifully written poem. Good job

[Kuhr Gred]

yeah.. i feel your sadness here at your poem.. like talking again to the reader.. ahha GREAT WRITE :D thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

[Renée]

Yes but its beautiful in its sadness ..wistful

[Barbara Walker]

This is very sad! Expresses that sadness well, very straight forward. I hope there can be some hope in the future some where, somehow.

[Pritesh]

True, life is a unravelling fact quiet topsy-tury in nature.You held both happiness and despair with good execution.keep writing:-)

[afra]

dis one is quite sad .....any way nice work done here