How golden

I notice you on your

journey of this world along

mine and capture your sence

of being: pure, fragile  We rely

on each other even when poetry 

failes  Sooth and encourage

wander along streams and rivers

climb mountains and dunes

discouver forrests or just linger 

at sea  Being wherever you are 

is great happiness, for I wish

to know you as I know me

If time dictates us to go our 

separate ways - as time can - 

our lives together will have been 

worth while...you'll see

Reviews

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This has a lovely flow, full of hope, desire, and longing. Beautifully written!

[Jeannine Winklaar]

Thank you Sharon .

[~]

Jeannine, I really like the feel of this poem. I like how you interrupt the thought and pull the reader into the next verse and hold us tight to find out what's next. A good promise to end it with - honey, it was worth it!

[Jeannine Winklaar]

Thank you Moonskitles for reading my poem. Nice meeting you.

[~]

You are welcome! Nice meeting you too :)

[Jamestown]

Very nice well written piece, I enjoyed reading this and b-blessed!

[Jeannine Winklaar]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my writing.