a life for a memory

The eternal fire in the sunlights eyes leads me through the night
Nobody said it would be easy or hard
A life worth living a strike for a fight
One mind shattered by pain a search for that one shard
We part searching for the lost memory of that time in each of our hearts.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

One mind shattered by pain a search for that one shard

Great a poignant write and I love the line I've hi-lighted, great metaphor.
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[Heather]

thank you im glad you enjoyed it!! :D

[Sami Khalil]

Another great poem. Short but packed with meanings...Wonderful...:)

[Heather]

thank you i like to vary lengths some times thanks again! :)

[Sami Khalil]

I understand...That was a compliment...:)

[Heather]

i know and thanks for it it is much appreciated :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)