time

not from personal experience but definitely something people struggle with in day to day life

news of life brings joy, knowing a child is on the way

this child is then bought a toy and is growing every day

the child then kicks expressing to the mother feelings of happiness and love

but a bird then tricks you into believing your purity and mistaking yourself for a dove

then gone,

the child is in heaven the mother would say

she smiled but then truly would shed a tear every day

one heart is all it takes

for a woman to start to notice others and their mistakes

no one life is forever

one day we are but gone, no matter the weather.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"one heart is all it takes

for a woman to start to notice others and their mistakes

no one life is forever

one day we are but gone, no matter the weather."

[Heather]

thanks!!....

[Sami Khalil]

Most welcome,...:)

[Tom]

Life is but short and precious and not to be taken for granted !

A splendid message in this well crafted sweet poem !

[Heather]

aww thank you i'm glad the message caught your attention, thank you for taking the time to read and review!! :D

[MikeV]

Nice interpretation of life and death, and how quickly time passesI really enjoyed this read :)

[Heather]

thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed it!! :D

[Chris]

a fair understanding of the Impermanence of life

[Heather]

thank you, i thought so too :)

[zainul]

Wonderful expression about a child and a mother.
It started with joy of birth and ended with sorrow of death.

[Heather]

thank you, i put it as it is remembering that life can be and is difficult, thank you for taking the time to read and review its appreciated!! :D

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
I appreciate you for taking real situations of life for writing the piece.
This is a great reminder for us all.

[Mia]

this is beautifully written! you wrote with the topic very well.

[Heather]

thank you!, and for reading it means a lot and thank for reviewing!! :)

[Shivam Murari]

Such a brightly sparking poem with great truth within! Splendid write. :)

Please read my poems too :)

[Heather]

wiill do and thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

[Shivam Murari]

: )

[Pryde Foltz]

This one gave me a visceral response. Thank you for your honest write.

[Heather]

im glad you liked it thanks for taking the time to read

[Scout Ventures]

Pretty! True too, and they are the best kind!! Love!

[Heather]

thanks i thought truth would be meaningful thank yooouuuu!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

I felt the effects of time and what it brings into our daily lives. A splendid poem...:)

[Heather]

thanks i wanted to write something with meaning to a lot of people thanks again for reviewing!

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know . You are welcome...:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)..............