there once was a time

fictional love poem ;)

there once was a time,

when i'd look in your eyes,

and be reassured,

that everythings alright.

there once was a time

when i'd hold your hands

we would cuddle all night

until the sunlight

there once was a time 

when we would be together

your soft lips against mine

reminded me of easy times

there once was a time

when i'd sit by your side

we would talk forever more

now suddenly i'm a bore

i never worked out 

why you had to cease

i just long to know

that you'll rest in peace

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"there once was a time

when we would be together

your soft lips against mine

reminded me of easy times"

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid poem. Thank you for sharing...:).....................

[irrelevant]

thanks man i appreciate it.

[Sami Khalil]

Much welcome...:)...............

[Ifreakinloveyou]

I love how this sounds like the begining of a storybook; and how, at first, it sounds like a breakup, but then you realize why they're not together. Great job :)

[irrelevant]

thank you, much appreciated

[Ifreakinloveyou]

No problem :)