Dazzled

Another poem I wrote in the night time.

The taste of your

lip balm on my tongue

After the party had

just begun

The sweet sensation

of your hands in mine

With a feeling so dazzling

I was on cloud nine

We went across the lawn

to the back gate

Kissing beneath the stars,

happy with this fate

We talked for hours

in a small garden

Until we had 

to be pardoned

Even at home

the thought of her still followed

And I wish that I

could see her again tomorrow

Author's Note

Wow, I keep writing random poems in the night. Also, I'm trying to rhyme things a little bit, but I'm not sure this is the best.

Reviews

[Ghost/Gray]

This is a very nice poem, and I can really see the pictures in my head while reading this.
Also, your rhyming is getting better! (Not that I´m one to judge, but still.)
:)