at this particular moment

at this particular moment

A Poem by witheringcloud

at this particular moment
plighted by your disregard
appalled by your pride
and how well you've been thus far

I've been distracted by your heart.

at this particular moment
disgusted by your critiques
saddened by your judgmental character
and known to run with the "freaks"

I've been distracted by your heart.

at this particular moment
my soul is bursting with contempt
how dare you magnify the world
when you're actually apart of it?

I've been distracted by my heart.

© 2011 witheringcloud


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I know what this feeling is like, experience it every day, and try to be brave. You express it very clearly and distinctly. The journey of your lines from the essence of "your heart" to "my heart" is very significant (for me).

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hi there. I write to survive, mentally. more..