Step Forward

The downfall races

I regulate my tears

ending wars, I

bring peace to my own.

Fullest, fillest, love.

Wondrous petal of

transcendent beauty.

Smiles, belief, magic

flowering humanity, 

strong, fragile, 

stepping forward, only a small,

small step,

beaming light to the farthest star.

The mist lessens, the magnitude

extraordinary

loveliness personified, gratefulness 

expands

and I'm glad to be alive.

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

love is hard to explain but you really did it justice here..

one can only feel like it was, paid forward, with each step these words took..

wonderfully done!
:)

[Wendy Karasin]

Oh, Antonio, I misread - I thought this was Chris' response. So, allow me to say to you what I said to him..."It's nice when somebody 'gets' it! And so eloquently I might add. It was (and is) paid forward, with each step...

[Antonio Valentino]

well if i may borrow from Chris's review, thank you for placing a smile on my face.. i feel paid in full

:)

[Wendy Karasin]

Perfect!!!

[Chris]

This one held a good smile within it...

[Wendy Karasin]

Thank you Chris, it's nice when someone 'gets' it! And so eloquently, I might add. It was (and is) paid forward, with each step...