Seperated

Seperated...

May 10 2008

 

I'm on the ground

Tears of hatred

Tears of pure pain

No escape from this damned destiny

Trapped in this accursed life

I'm dead in this moonlight

The Lady and the Lord beg me to awake from this nightmare

Tourtured heart

Broken soul

I have no escape from this nightmare though

I'm stuck in this wonderland of tears

I'm lost in this dance of the dead

My eyes closed

The voices pass silently

Talk behind my back more...

I know you will

No mistake

But I'm lost in this wonderland of heartbreak

Lost in this nightmare of death

Lost in the Lady and Lord's words of wisdom

Nothing else makes since

Broken in pieces

Trying to put myself together

Only breaking more

I'm oblivious to life

I say what must

But I die for what I say

Lost in your eyes of mass confussion and disarray

They are so innocent

But lustful at the same time

Lost in the mass murder of your lips

All the lies that you must speak

To tourcher this heart to totall agony

Lost in the land of your crimson tears

Fatal and unsure

So broken by your insecurity

Killed in the land of the false haven

So alluring

They worship the dance of the dead

Unknowing of what is to come

Their eyes turn black in this crimson night

No hope is left in this nightmare life

The song of the dead hallows out our hearts

The Lady and the Lord whisper in disappointment

The lost souls of this nightmare love

Broken into oblivion

The screams of the night echo on this barren landscape

The broken hearts torn into pieces

Fire to the deads souls

burn the ground they walk on

the hearts of total pain

lost in this nightmare

lost in this land of lies

how many more!?!

the endless lines of death line up

The dance continues

dead pass

Tourtured hearts

Cry in pain

Tremble in the light

Love in the dark

Dance along with the dead

Walk into total oblivion

Sing the song of fire

They cannot stop you know

We cast to the oblivion

We walk along death and life

We cry amogest the dead

for we are seperated

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

this took me a while because it was difficult to tie everything i wanted together for this poem

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

You lost me... I can't follow the poem, which is saying something cause you'd think of anyone of this website I would.

[Wolfwind Words]

Wow! I loved the imagery you packed into this. It made the theme so vivid and strong.

The size of the print was a bit small, making it hard to read. But other then that, I saw no flaw!

My favorite part;
"The screams of the night echo on this barren landscape
The broken hearts torn into pieces
Fire to the deads souls
burn the ground they walk on"

I could hear the echos as they ran off. Flames leaping from the ground to incinerate the dead's souls.

Great Write
Infinity's Shadow