Hate to Love You

You meant so much to me...

But now when I see you it's like twisting a knife in the wound...

I hate you...

But...

I... still love you...

And I hate it...

I don't want this feeling anymore...

You used me...

And I won't forgive you for that...

I... Don't want to see you...

I don't want to feel anymore pain...

I'm tired of being hurt and crying...

Wishing I could cut...

But I wont...

I hate you...

And I hate to love you...

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Very interesting! I liked the concept of this poem. Your poem carried a feeling that I could definitely relate to, and I think that you conveyed these emotions very well. The ellipses certainly helped in shaping the progression of the poem, and was a definite advantage to the effortless flow of your piece. In a way, I wish that you had explored your ideas a bit more, as I felt that you only brushed the surface of these emotions. I think that with a little further digging, this could have been an even more powerful piece.
However, I really enjoyed reading your poem! It was a very heartfelt and raw piece. Well done,
~PaperHearts

[~AmateurWriter]

A lot of ellipses (...'s) and it's more like a story or a letter to someone then a poem but still very good and emotional.