Emotionless

Black skies...

Cold and live off of cold lies

Deception...

Heart break...

Everything that could make the someone cry.

Love?

What is love anymore

All I can see

Is false hope...

A broken dove?

Sweet simple words...

Leave you broken

But what is true

Or false anymore?

I can't really say...

So many questions...

So little time...

How can I say I'm fine?

This sweet bitter life

Has left me broken and scarred

Alone in what seems like forever...

But I can't really say how I feel anymore...

I'm Emotionless....

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

I understand. I really can relate, its that terrible? again, your poetry...

[*~Kristy~*]

I love this, I really do. I've just come out of a time like this. The entire summer I was like this. I was like a zombie. I just sank into nothing, like I was a ghost among the living, just floating the hallowed halls. I actually think I have an old poem about this. I don't know. Just know that it WILL get better.
I love how you done the color change at the word emotionless by the way. It was clever and nice at the same time. It was great.
AMAZING POEM!!!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Hey this was really good.. and I have been here! The flow and emotion running through show a whole barrel of confused emotions that generally leave people feeling numb or emotionless when they hit what I call overload! Love is something that you always have once you love yourself.. then you don't need to seek it.. it finds YOU .. usually just slowly develops for me in a special friendship.. that climbs gradually higher. So many can possibly relate to this.. the intensity is true to the feeling.. you hit that right on!