Forever And Ever

 

A rotten corpse

your dead memory

I will bury

in an unmarked grave

on the outskirts of my mind

 

From hence forth,

forgotten you are,

forever

and ever

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

i don't think that's how it works

[.]

you were meant to be
forgotten, i remember
with my precise words

. "outskirts of my mind" is sheer genius ... plus ... i agree with em ...

[em]

the load of remembering
i won't carry now
i live in lightness - weightless

[MagiCrystal]

SO SAD... SO SAD... MY SOUL CRIES.... SO TRUE THAT MY TEARS ROLLED DOWN... AWESOME WORDS...

[mysticgypsy]

wow , powerful i like it

[AK]

I'll bet writing this one was therapeutic...
Good job.