"Oblivion"

"What if you end up in oblivion, Where everything totally lost..."

Day of acquaintance

Exchange names, along with smiles;

Moment of absence

“Goodbye!”  Resonates from ten miles;

Limbo seizes remembrance

Wanders on dark, boundless aisles;

Some will come to pass in oblivion,

Where they will lead to extinction.

 

Author's Note

For those who have been forgotten by people they truly care....
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Reviews

[Stephanie M]

Your poem is deep, and meaningful. This is a well written poem with good use of imagery.

[Sami Khalil]

Very relatable and happening to so many. Bravo....

[Rache David]

thank you for the comment...
yes it does really happen...:-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........

[Angad Waraich]

I could relate.
Thought invoking.
Thank you for sharing

[Revolutionary]

I miss many people and I'm sure there are people who miss me.this made me think of them.nice work

[Rache David]

thank you.. I think sometimes people tend to forget those they loved before.
And it's not right, is it?