Rose Petals

a wedding poem

Rose petals of love

fall at your feet

a sweet begining

we will soon meet

 

you say you will

I say I do

we start our lives

together a new

 

you pledge your love

and I`ll pledge mine

and our love will

begin the test of time

 

your gown of blue

your hair of gold

just the sight of you

warms my soul

 

after today

our hearts will beat as one

I pledge my life

I pledge my love

and I pray

for guidance from above...

 

Reviews

[alf]

Hi wordman. Another great write. This one perhaps a tad terse for me, I like romance sof and sweet, but the expression of your love is strong and that carries the poem beautifully. Loved it, alf

[wordman]

this too is a older write,it was actually a contest for a ladie`s daughter that was getting married,and she wanted something to put on the napkins,when i got started it turned in to a poem

[alf]

I did like the wording and the poem, just that I thought it a little abrupt, but the explanation tells me why!!!

[Tiana]

Beauty, love and romance so beautifully intertwined ... beautifully written, Ron ...

[wordman]

hey tiana `thanks for your visit I wrote this one way back when lol

[Tiana]

Just as beautiful now as it was way back then :) Always a pleasure to visit you :)

[B.J]

Very intimate, but bought a smile to my face

[wordman]

glad you liked it, thanks for the visit

[wordman]

actually a lady from starlite café wanted something to print on the napkins at her daughters wedding so I wrote the first stanza for her and a few days later I finished it up

[B.J]

Wonderful, congratulations....A wonderful tribute to your talent

[Sami Khalil]

Romantic and to the bone...:).............

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome:).........

[Tate Morgan]

You are the eternal romantic heart good for you

[wordman]

thanks for the visit tate always welcome

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcoem friend

[s y e]

Wooooooooo, this gorgeous, dudeee! Love it all, unchained melody is my favourite song ever!!! You hit the bullseye dude.

[wordman]

thank you for visiting my humble home two names lol

[s y e]

Lol, aren't you funny.

[maria ( rose)]

I'm gonna call you Master Ron the master of romance..
This is pure magic to a woman's heart these words that you write are astonishing
just a delight to read and you chose the best music for this poem for sure I absolutely love it.. whoa!! awesome job

[wordman]

you know I thank you ,your sounding like my friend a amos master of romance I wish I was I wish I could write just an old humble country boy