Rose Garden

Before the day
breaks through the night
the dew falls and glistens
in the light.

It waters the roses
in my garden so rare
only beauty will you find in there

It`s a special place
down in my soul
where no one else can ever go

Only I can trod that ground
it`s a place
no one else ever found...

Author's Note

you know when I wrote this piece I really didn't know what it was about
after reading comments from all sites I really thought about it and this is what I discovered.the rose garden is a metaphor of course it is my inner soul life waters my soul
but the person on the outside and the one on the inside are totally differen`t I don`t show the inside openly and people really don`t know me...

Reviews

[Latifa]

lovely the rythme sequences much enjoyed

[wordman]

and I thank you

[wordwarrior]

Oh this is a sad poem Ron. The imagery is soft, tender, yet the lonely feeling is etched with every word.
Lovely indeed.

[wordman]

thank you again I always appreciate your comments
Ron