I Close my Eyes

I close my eyes and i drift away

 

into that magic place where you stay

 

 

In dreams you`ll always be mine

 

I can hold you until the end of time

 

 

I can hear those soft words you used to say

 

when you made love to me in that special way

 

 

In my dreams you will always be mine

 

in my dreams I’ll love you until the end of time

 

 

You still hold the keys to my heart

 

in my dreams we never part...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
I like the message and flow,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

hey james,havent seen you much,thank you

[alf]

Hi Dan. This poem is music to my ears. I loved the softness of this write, the mellow expression of your feelings and the word choice won me over. A truly romantic offering, alf

[wordman]

thanks again alf,appreciated

[alf]

It was a truly wonderful read!!

[Perkele.7885]

Now try, ooby dooby my friend. a nice combination music and poem

[wordman]

thanks,i will look into it

[Chris]

Nice tying to Orbison's song... good sentiment.

[wordman]

thanks for the visit chris

[W R Stowe]

when you made love to me in that special way


In my dreams you will always be mine
Not to knit pic but I think "In my dreams you will always stay" just gives a different slant but that's just me kind of sounds like a short song nice poem wordman

Bill

[Valentine]

Very beautiful write. Makes me miss my husband even more. Valentine

[wordman]

and you always`s will thank you

[Matching Socks]

So beautiful and lyrical.
You've such a romantic heart. :)

[wordman]

hey girl,thanks hope you had a great new year

[Confuser]

Beautiful words! Oh my Goodness, the joker has a HEART! I loved it - flowed so beautifully wordman, great writing and oh that melodic voice of Roy Orbison. Nothing like it - Picked music that equates to your lovely words. Thank you so much! Guten Tag!

[wordman]

i can write hot! i can write cold ! i can touch your very soul. it takes about 3 to 5 minutes for me to write a poem and 15 minutes to find the right music. thank you again

[Confuser]

Worman, so full of it; now music is my thing. Could never write it, the words, but finding music, not so hard.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful song and words. Thank you for sharing your words. I hope you had a Merry Christmas and you will have a safe and fun New Year. I wish you great success and happiness in the coming year.
Coyote

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit and your kind words my friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words and thoughts.