Come Softly my Darling

Come softly my darling

be mine tonight

put your arms around me

hold me tight

Kiss me softly

all through the night

come softly my darling

the world is ours tonight

Take the ribbon from your hair

let`s slip into the night

I promise you darling everything

will be yours tonight

I will take you places

you`ve never been

and if I`m lucky tomorrow night

I will take you again...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Softly you walk us through romance and softly you anticipate their chance. Excellent...:)..........

[wordman]

wow thanks again sami lol I am the wordman

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).........

[Matching Socks]

So refreshingly romantic.
Beautiful. :)

[wordman]

amice I am glad you like my humble poetry and thanks for stopping by

[Matching Socks]

My pleasure. :)

[wordman]

an`ce listened to spell check

[Matching Socks]

Lol. It's ok, forgiven. xx

[HeazerH]

I love this beautiful, romantic poem. Thanks for writing!

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Pryde Foltz]

I will take you places
you`ve never been
and if I`m lucky tomorrow night
I will take you again...

We should all be so lucky. Simply romantic.

[wordman]

thank you pryde for reading

[A. Amos]

I will take you places
you`ve never been
and if I`m lucky tomorrow night
I will take you again...

Pure magic you created and above ending you nailed it my friend...i can see an amazing song in this one..

[wordman]

good to see you my friend,thank`s

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Angie G]

" I promise you darling everything will be yours tonight", it would be amazing if even for one night. As usual you've hit the spot... Thank you!!!

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[wordman]

well I am the wordman lol

[maria ( rose)]

♥♥♥♥♥ hearts for this beautiful song and this lovely, lovely poem.

you are a teddy bear alright. Some lucky woman is gonna snatch you right up. :)
enjoyed this very much. Well done!!!
-maria

[wordman]

thank you maria lol they would throw me back

[maria ( rose)]

hahaaaaaa/stop!! no, they wouldn't. You are too kind.