If You Were Mine

I look into your eyes

I see the pain with in

let me hold you sweet heart

tonight I will be your friend

If you were my girl

if your love was mine

my eyes could only see you

my heart would be blind

A sweet kiss each morning

hold you tight at night

we would slip nude in our hot tub

on a moon lite night

If you were my girl

if your love was mine

I would love you forever

if only you were mine...

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

kind of sweet this story of love in the hot tub with sweeter kisses like wine. such an enjoyable write to find here on this poetry site. You have hit the highs and covered the loving poetry with such ease.

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit

[Confuser]

Very sweet love story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. It's what everybody needs/desires and you expressed it quite nicely. Alabama used to play at downtown Myrtle Beach, SC, before their success. I was very young, and we (my friend and me) would go and explore. Her mother and family would watch them. Anyway, thanks.

[wordman]

well i thank you for the visit it was my pleasure i have a friend that ran alabamas radio stationread morewell i thank you for the visit it was my pleasure i have a friend that ran alabamas radio station
for a long time she also does gospel music they are good people

[Confuser]

You're welcome. We saw them many times - but rushed away. Not sure of the spelling: Bowery? It was where they played. Got a record deal somewhere in there.

[Confuser]

I don't know who in the world wrote this, but you need to learn how to spell better.....never said the N word in my life..............I'm sorry, I cannot stop laughing, because this is so ignorant.

[jennifer little]

great words . great passion of such love . and you had a wonderful flow to this poem keep up the amazing work and keep on writing

[wordman]

glad you liked it I appreciate your visit

[jennifer little]

your welcome for the vist

[B.J]

Great words. Tenderly written

[wordman]

thank you for the visit my door is always open

[B.J]

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

sad but beautiful. Great poem.

[wordman]

thanks taylor for the visit

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful Ron. I would love to hear this with music. It is lovely.

:) Julie

[wordman]

thank you Julie I know a couple songs on piano and a couple on guitar not good enough to write or play lol

[maria ( rose)]

I got a chill~ what a beautiful song..The lyrics are amazing!! and the poem is so sweet. Great Job with this whole piece...:)
maria rose

[wordman]

thanks for reading

[maria ( rose)]

your welcome!!

[stars are far]

that was very sweet.. hehe.. and the feelings are amazing there..
"if you were my girl" this sentence shows me like real love, hence you are calling her "My girl" not woman or lady..but girl ,which seems to me like you want here to be a litle kid between your arms.. that was very nice
well done :)

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Sami Khalil]

Now that one is a song type of poem. Lyrical and amazing...:)...............

[wordman]

yeah I am a rock star lol thanks for reading

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. All possible...All possible...:)................