Love Story

As I lie here by your side

my head on your breast`s

I can feel your heart beat

deep inside

Your skin feels so soft

against mine

your sweet embrace

your tender size

You don`t realize

but sometime`s I just lay and

watch you sleep

I can see the dreams sweeping

through your mind

I can feel the love from inside

you`re so special to me I love you so I just can`t

seem to find the words

to tell you so

So please don`t think

that I don`t care

it`s just the words

I don`t know how to share

So I wrote this poem

just for you

so you`ll know

how much I love you...

Reviews

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Very sweet and caring words.....thank you for sharing your gift.

[Corset]

That IS so very romantic, to imagine one can see inside your mind , to watch your dreams, to admit to watching them sleep, is very unsettling, lol, but beautiful. It reminds me of lois Lane and clark kent in that scene where he is flying her over the city,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xqI3a4vBpxU

[Butch Decatoria]

Aww, so sweet it gave me a cavity... hallmark love potion in one poem... she must have swoon. kudos.

[silent poet]

Very touching and sweet. I appreciate this more so because I have been in that place! It was a wonderful feeling but also a frustrating one not being able to identify what I was feeling in it's entirety. :) I definitely love this!! Reading this put me back in the picture I only look back at now.. nice work

[mattavelli]

This is sweat. I like to watch mine sleep too.
Couple fixes: sometime(s) and breast/breasts- depends on your head size, I guess. Haha

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Lovely declaration of love Wordman. One small correction, fifth stanza is You're not Your.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Love is all about passion and feelings & Souls. Somebody should learn from you...Great lines!