You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart

You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know

You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring

You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

[wordman]

you are a true detective my friend ,thanks

[Archana]

Beautifully written....Really fell in love with this poem

[wordman]

thank you!

[Dr. Wood ?]

reads kinda like a song...good stuff

[wordman]

thanks doc,i appreciate the visit

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Beautifully written and full of love! Nicely inked!

[wordman]

thank you jane for the visit

[micky]

This is a really beautiful piece I love everything about this poem ....well done :)

[wordman]

i really appreciate your visit

[ANTO]

Magnificent flow here WM and in the flowing there is an abundance of love - a true pleasure to read and experience - thanks for sharing

[Jimmy Yetts]

Eloquent and emotive.
A lovely creation in form as well as content.
Quality offering, wordman!

Posted 1 Month Ago