Your my inspiration

You are my inspiration

you are my muse

as we dance across the floor

my ink spills like tears from my heart

I write of love

I write of pain

I wonder what joy

tomorrow will bring

Your love

inspires me to write on

and I write of your love

as we dance on

dance,dance across my mind

my ink spilling on paper

as we dance through time

inspire me my darling

as the ink pours from my pen

there is no beginning

there is no end...

Reviews

[Astrid]

This is lovely and adorable ~

I had a poetry teacher who hated the word "dance" in poetry...I wish I could show her this :P

[wordman]

sounds like she was afraid of dance,maybe it runs deeper
thank you for the visit

[Astrid]

No problem!

[wordman]

so are you new here

[Astrid]

Yes, I am.

[wordman]

well it`s a good site you will enjoy it

[Astrid]

That's good to hear, I'm hoping so! So far it seems so.

[Debra]

Wonderful. Your words just flow.

[wordman]

this one kinda snuck up on me I actually wrote it on line.thank you

[Debra]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Romantic and inspirational from beginning to end. You write of true love indeed...:)......

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I simply loved these lines, Lines
of a very passionate and Romantic poet
Write on my poet friend!


dance,dance across my mind

my ink spilling on paper

as we dance through time




inspire me my darling

as the ink pours from my pen

there is no beginning

there is no end...



Wow this was very lovely and romantic I enjoyed
the read thank you for stopping by my page.


Thank you for sharing. God bless . Benita

[wordman]

thank you,and it was my pleasure

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. was a pleasure to read as always. Thank you :)

[Matching Socks]

Ultra romantic poem.
Beautiful.

[wordman]

thank`s,good to see you out

[Matching Socks]

Slowly emerging from my bomb shelter. :)
Thanks.

[wordman]

bomb shelter lol well I just got mail from chris v using my name and picture

[Matching Socks]

Yikes, that is scary.

[wordman]

well he has taste

[Matching Socks]

Lol. Says you. :)
Thank you. Good to see you've not lost your sense of humour.

[wordman]

been sick since Friday but I have that humor I am full of it

[katja]

this is truly a lovely string of thoughts... each line a little gem.
*
i particularly enjoyed "dance,dance across my mind"...
... it made me think of electric sparks snapping & dancing between synapses

thoroughly enjoyed the read
~yekaterina

[wordman]

thank you for the visit and fr

[ANTO]

Im such a wanderer - sorry Ron, I meant to review earlier.
A wonderful homage to the muse and the feelings that are inspired when they are near. You could write these forever when the mood is just right, I feel
Very slick my friend
:)

[wordman]

anto I appreciate all your visits, but I`m not the kind that expects any thing from my friends
just happy to be a friend and thank you

[RomaJ]

A very lovely and enchanting poem and of course Romantic.

[wordman]

roma I appreciate your visit

[RomaJ]

You are very welcome:)

[blue angel]

I've always loved that song, and having it pared with your precious poetry is felt in the deepest of sentiment. Thank you for sharing this lovely poetry sensation. Respectfully, blue angel

[wordman]

I thank you for the visit

[blue angel]

It was my pleasure. And thank you deeply for serving in the Armed Forces! ;)

[Gee]

Romance ain't gonna die whilst you're about.Nice poem Ron.(should "your" in the title read you're as in you are?

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,and yes it should be

[Gee]

My pleasure