Bleed

Stab me slow, watch me bleed

is it my pain that you need

you stabbed me in the back

and then walked away

and here I stand still bleeding today

I don`t know why you hurt me so

I don` know why you turned so cold

you closed all doors,you return my mail

do you enjoy putting me through hell

Do you really believe those lies

you didn`t even ask me,i was surprised

do you really know me,i don`t think you do

if you did you know I`d never be untrue...

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Do they who abandon you really know you? You express the emotions and unanswered questions left very well in this offering.

[wordman]

no my friend they didn`t

[andrew mitchell]

I like this Wordman and a song it could be. Alice Coopers "only Women bleed" came to mind! :)

[wordman]

thanks Andrew,and it would

[ANTO]

I dont know how I missed this one WM - it is so lyrical it could definitely be a song too.
Probably my favourite of yours so far my friend
:))

[wordman]

thanks for taking the time anto

[ANTO]

okay thats scary - the quickest reply to a review ever !! lol
Good morning my friend.
:))

[wordman]

I was working on you tube, and clicked over to see who was on

[ANTO]

Ah, not stalking me then :(

[wordman]

not a stalker

[Woody]

a nice way to describe betrayal. is it naive to trust completely and not expect to be stabbed in the back?
is it really love if yoou are constantly on your guard?
good one wordman.

[wordman]

hey woody,hell this might be true, lol thank you

[Ruth]

There is sometimes no answers - we just have to be good and kind to ourselves when such happens xo

[wordman]

thank you poppy,just a rant no meaning

[Valentine]

Like the word flow and the story this write tells. Nice write. Valentine

[wordman]

thank you for taking the time

[JayceeC]

Unfortunately we always think the ones we love know us better than they do and at some point that comes to a head and creates havoc. Lack of trust is hard to survive and leaves such deep scars. Thanks for sharing this.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

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So many people go through this heartbreak. So sorry. d and well written emot poem

[wordman]

don`t know where it came from,but i thank you for the review
I've never had a bad break up just depression i guess

[.]

~~ betrayal is excruciating... and this piece reveals every part of it... ~~ excellent work...

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[.]

~~ you're very welcome...

[Jimmy Yetts]

Life is mostly defeat.
Christians lose their share of battles; they can, however, take solace in the fact that they have already won the war--an apparently far-off notion which may not always seem balm enough for our freshest deep hurts, but it should be.
"Bleed" painfully portrays a place we've all visited.
Hard-hitting bit of poetry, wordman!

[wordman]

thank you Frankie,and your summation of the rest is pretty much on target