Am i that easy to forget

Was i that easy to forget

it seems you are doing fine

they say a broken heart

will mend in time

 

But time has stood still

since you said goodbye

you broke my heart

you made me cry

 

They say men don`t cry

but honey that`s not true

i have cried a lot of tears

over you

 

I guess

what hurts the most

is you didn`t need me

you didn`t need me at all...

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Three of the hardest words to truly mean is "I love you" these words are often only associated with sex and lose the true meaning.I bounced back and forth and up and down like a yo yo for a long period of time in my previous relationship.Once I let go I started to heal and mend then God brought Jocelyn into my life and now I truly know what love really is.

Bill

[silent poet]

I know exactly how much this hurts.. how it feels and how tormented one can be dealing with heartache. This was all to real for me .. touching and agonizing. Beautiful write.. It's not easy to accept one doesn't need us after they say they love us so. just know that love will find you still

[wordman]

thank you silent poet , I appreciate your visit

[silent poet]

you're welcome :)

[Mitali Shah]

Very nice Wordman, people relate to you and such things a lot in every part of the world. God bless :)

[wordman]

thank you mitali,for the visit

[Mitali Shah]

your welcome dear

[Great Aunt Astri]

So many must be able to emphasise with this poem! You have written it well, a story that is universal!

[wordman]

thank you for the review,long time since i seen you

[Great Aunt Astri]

Been busy writing a book!

[wordman]

hope you get rich

[sereenaoutloud]

oh wow Ron this was so heartfelt....stop it,, you keep bringing tears to my eyes with your writes..lol
No seriously this is so beautifully penned. You feel the heartbreak and the pain it caused. Tt reminds me of the words from a song by the script called breakeven,
"what am i suppose to say when I'm all chocked up and your okay"

[wordman]

thank you,haven't heard that one

[sereenaoutloud]

its a good one i will post to ya profile ...i think you will like it!!

[wordman]

i did like it,thanks

[sereenaoutloud]

you are more than welcome ! :)

[Xabanisa Thabiso]

cuts straight into the hurt. I don't know which hurts most, being left heart-broken or loving someone hoping it will be different, (never is)

[wordman]

thanks for the review,it`s just another one of my crazy writes

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Great flow and sad message, but is something
that happens to often:(
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

thank you james,appreciate your visit i am busy warding off evil spirits lol tk little

[Jamestown]

I always pray for him, obviously something is wrong:(
Be blessed my brother!!!

[AaronFreitas]

I really like this one my friend... somehow I didn't see it...but I am glad I did. "They say men don't cry..." Only if they saw us behind closed doors brother. Loved it :)

[wordman]

thank you aaron,appreciate your comment

[AaronFreitas]

You're welcome buddy