Frozen

 

 

When we first met

your heart was frozen

but we felt a spark

 

Your heart started to melt and thaw

our love started to bloom

as a beautiful spring day

as the ice melted away

 

You reached out to me

like a vine in bloom

the warmth of my heart

melted your soul

 

As I nurtured you

our passion started to grow

the love melted your heart

as we became one with nature

 

I touched you,like the sun

touches a flowering bud

I touched your soul

and our love grew like a flowering rose...

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are definitely in a romantic frame of mind WM in this sensitive and romantically loving piece.

[wordman]

thank you john

[Corset]

oh wordman, what a romantic write. melting hearts and souls around the globe :) I especially enjoyed stanza three :)

[wordman]

i thank you for taking the time to read,thanks

[John Reese]

Hello everyone,
I am new here and i wish you all the best!
I love the meter and the metaphors ring true!!
I am 51 and you brought back memories from my youth.
Thank You

[wordman]

thank you,and welcome to w/c

[John Reese]

Thank You Bropoemseth!

[wordman]

my pleasure,we`re both in construction

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work my friend!
The wording is fantastic and imagery to mirror:)
the beautiful picture doesn't hurt either,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

thank you james

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Stunning simply
yet made me cry
I miss someone very
Dearly right
now this
really pieced my heart.


Thank you for sharing.


God bless my friend. Benita

[wordman]

thank you benita,not supposed to cry..hope it gets better for you soon

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I hope so too just not spoken to them
in so long hard not to miss them I guess :)

[wordman]

aah!sounds like you are reminessing

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

No it isn't that. It's weird if someone
is depressed or sad inside or
thinking of me I cry
uncontrollably and i
cannot stop that strong.

[wordman]

it is that gift in you !!

[John Reese]

The soul is exposed in the form of a broken heart.
I love brevity.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Yes I know and yes
you're right. I could think of
someone if they have sadness I cry
But I've been seeing a lot of
other things God's been
showing me I've tried to block
but I still see them like it'll
happen nothing I can do so
I've stopped fighting it.

[wordman]

it is your calling,can`t hide