You Knew

If ever

you see my face,

in the spring,

or in the fall;

 during a gentle rain

when a flower blooms,

or a tree bursts forth its fruit,

think of me:

Remember,

that I loved you,

even though

I never told you.

But you knew,

you could feel my love,

in the falling dew

of the morning sun.

you knew.

You gave me peace,

you touched my soul,

you knew,

that I loved you so ...

Reviews

[ANTO]

good write Ron - *applauds*

"But you knew
you could feel my love" - I'd like to see But you knew ... (with the ellipsis or even insertion of a blank lines afterwards for pause)

This is surely shooting from the heart. Delightful my friend.
100 points my friend :))

[wordman]

thank you for the review anto

[Sami Khalil]

One of your best. Good to the bone. Excellent. ...:)......

[wordman]

thank you much sammi

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sadly romantic in its yearning solitude and reflection WM

[wordman]

thank you ,john

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I forgot to say wonderful music choice WM!!