Sweet Dreams { a duet with Micky }

Last night in my dreams

we made love,for the first time

it was special

not like any one before

Your sweet lips on mine

the feel of your soft skin

your gentle touch

as your body slides closer in time

Our bodies so close I feel your heart racing

playing and touching slowly caressing

I hear your soft moans in my ear

I whisper for you to trust me

Feeling your hand searching I move my

lips down to your neck

slowly moving my hands

slowly...

Reviews

[Tiana]

Great blending of inks -- a sensuous delight :)

[wordman]

lol,thank you

[Tiana]

:) my pleasure

[Baby Ricochet]

7th place? At 947 views I'd say this poem got 1st place with the popular reading list. The people have spoken & this poem won. Outstanding sir!

[wordman]

thank you !

[barleygirl]

I love this song, which is often playing in the back of my mind when I'm writing something sensuous. I love the slow, steady, sensuous dance in your message much more than raw intensity or verbal acrobatics, where the topic of lovemaking is concerned. Those seeking to go "higher & higher" often burn out & move on, whereas this steady approach is often more lasting. I also prefer a sensual message that is open-ended, becuz everyone envisions the details differently, so this doesn't thrust your preferences on the reader. Nicely imagined & written (((HUGS)))

[wordman]

thank you very much,yes you are right,let everyone have there own impression
and you must be suttle in writing this type poem,if not careful you make it sound dirty

[wordman]

7 th place in the co writers contest

[Celie Rose]

I could feel the emotion."your gentle touch. Our bodies so close Feeling your hand searching I move my." Goes well with the video. Good job

[wordman]

thank you !

[PANDORA]

as your body slides closer in time---I expected..closer to mine...what I got was closer in time...LOVE that line. It was an unexpected gem.

Thanks for the lovely read.

[wordman]

thank you pandora for the visit

[E G TEN]

Badabing! Such passionate words and intimately detailed
To the the bones. Well done! A cool collaboration indeed.
Thanks for sharing Mr. Word.

[wordman]

thank you eg

[Weeping willow]

Very tender moments with romantic images that flow through this write;] Beautiful.

[wordman]

ols micky did a great job,thank you

[stars are far]

that was so tender and very romantically described.. you actually made me imagine the face expressions and how they channge. well done :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,havent seen you lately

[stars are far]

yeah ive been trying to figure out some suff away from my computer and yeah i figuredout lots

[wordman]

hope it`s better now

[Valentine]

This reminds me of Conway Twitty's song "Slow Hand". You probably know the words to it. Valentine

[wordman]

he covered it from this group,micky just came and left i guess..thank you