Almost like a song

I lie here every night,

wishing , i could hold you tight;

as your beauty echoes softly through my mind,

as my heart,you gently entwine.

 

I feel your presence by my side,

as you gently unfold in my mind;

as we make love,i feel your soft skin,

as it caresses mine.

 

It was almost like a song,

the orchestra gently playing ;

as our bodies dance along,

then i awake, with tears in my eyes.

 

When i roll over to hold you,

i realize,it was just a dream;

as you,

lay gentle on my mind...

,

Author's Note

2 nd place in any poetry contest

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

This so gorgeous and elegant.



I loved these lines.

It was almost like a song
the orchestra gently playing
as our bodies dance along
then i awake with tears in my eyes



Thank you for sharing.


God bless Benita

[wordman]

thank you very much.i appreciate your comment

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome this
was very lovely all your love poems are very touching.
God bless Benita

[Mitali Shah]

lovelyyyy Wordman. Each stanza has fascination. :)

[wordman]

thank you so much mitali

[sunprincess]

...........very beautiful, and thank you so much for your help :) ★

[wordman]

we need more good writers here,we have lost a few to Bordeaux i guess lol
thank you for your comment

[Roxie M]

Lovely, so lovely. If it is published, you could have issues with line "...gentle on my mind."

[wordman]

who in the world would publish me,lol lord i could change that pretty easy,thank you

[Roxie M]

I just read you, why not listen to you? Thank you for sharing.

[wordman]

well i was on the open mike last friday with todd underhill.

[Roxie M]

good for you

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Beautiful and ethereal....dreamlike...thank you for sharing this soft romantic poetry.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit jane

[Miss Sharon]

Be still my beating heart! Though bittersweet and sad this is a most beautiful poem of love. ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon

[Miss Sharon]

You are welcome kind sir! ~SP

[Cory Barrett]

sad and lovely, good stuff here sir.

[wordman]

thank you cory

[Jimmy Yetts]

Has a lingering beauty.
Excellent work!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Gee]

A very touching write WM,

[wordman]

thank you mr gee