You and Me

When i woke

this morning ,

you were on my mind .

I just can`t ,

seem to get over you .

seems your always on my mind .

When it comes to you ,

my heart is blind .

i could never see any one else

in my life .

What kind of life

would it be ?

if there were ,

 no you and me ...

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

So beautifully romantic and well written Ron! Love your work my friend. ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon !

[Miss Sharon]

Always my pleasure Ron! ~SP

[Red Music]

Love it simply...........

[wordman]

and i thank you ! looking forward in reading you.

[Red Music]

Thanks ILL read your writings..

[wordman]

lol,i have about a hundred .

[Red Music]

thats too much...

[wordman]

how bout i read one of yours ? actually i have over 300 ! and none of them is good.

[Red Music]

well, ill post it and i think its not that good...just you wait

[wordman]

if it came from the heart ,it will be great !

[Red Music]

i'll post bunch of writings later just i settle everything and review it first..

[wordman]

i will be looking out for one !

[Red Music]

Thanks!!!!

[Aphy!]

Very beautiful. Short and sweet. Loved the simplicity of it.
Great job

Aphy

[wordman]

thank you very much !

[Shei]

I love the ending, simple but powerful! Good poem :)

[wordman]

thank you! i don't know any big words,lol

[Shei]

Lol, yes you do, besides simplicity is just as effective and beautiful

[wordman]

never heard a song with ten dollar words! not that mine is a song,but this is what i shoot for.

[AaronFreitas]

This is awesome! I get a peak at the romantic side of you! :)

[wordman]

thank you aaron,appreciate your visit!

[AaronFreitas]

Anytime buddy :)

[Chris]

Good feelings and a nice aftertaste to it.

[wordman]

thank you chris

[Chris]

anytime man

[Valentine]

Very nice and right to the point. Valentine

[wordman]

thank you!

[Melinda McQueen]

What a sweet poem,
straight from your heart.
Nicely penned.

[wordman]

thank you melinda for your sweet review

[Insight "MH"]

These are lovely written emotions. The thought of losing the one who means the most to you is terrifying. Thank you for sharing those pure emotions.

Insight.

[wordman]

thank you for reading! and i thought everybody forgot me,or tired of me

[Insight "MH"]

Oh no, you are in my heart and mind.

[wordman]

a good place to be i`m sure,thanks

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome. ^_^