You and Me

When i woke

this morning ,

you were on my mind .

I just can`t ,

seem to get over you .

seems your always on my mind .

When it comes to you ,

my heart is blind .

i could never see any one else

in my life .

What kind of life

would it be ?

if there were ,

 no you and me ...

Reviews

[Unknown Poet]

Very Nice..
This touched me....
Thanks for inspiration...

[wordman]

thank you for the visit ! it touched me as well

[Unknown Poet]

Most Welcome....

[Pryde Foltz]

A touching and heartfelt piece, Wordman:)

[wordman]

thank you pryde

[RomaJ]

aw sigh...tis a special kind of person, that can leave such a lasting impression on one's so sweet. Such sweet words, wordman. Very romantic piece.

[wordman]

thank you roma !

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

wow, this poem= wow, keep up the amazing work my friend

[wordman]

i will do my best,thank you for reading

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

your welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

your welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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What a warm hug you have written here :))) the heart is blind, very true my friend!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit..

[JMKane117]

I really like the line: my heart is blind. There's something so haunting and powerful about that image. Well done!

[wordman]

it means, i only have eyes for you,thank you for the visit !

[Rebecca Pall]

Something a lot of us can relate to. I really enjoyed reading this.

[wordman]

and i enjoyed your visit ! thank you

[Indra Neil]

simple yet profound brevity! the last stanza is a perfect ending! :)

[wordman]

and i thank you.

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! :)

[Barbz]

Could it be any clearer. Thank you for the depth of your simplicity......Barbz

[wordman]

thank you barbz for taking the time to visit my humble site.