Dreams

Dreams may come

and dreams may go

like the beauty

of our first snow

They cover our minds

with tender bliss

as our hearts reminisce

Another place

another time

dreams come

from the portals of our minds

To people and places

we reminisce

and the loved ones

that we miss

Dreams may come

and dreams may go

like the beauty

of our first snow...

inspired by valentine ,and the dreams

of her late husband. 

Reviews

[Lola_Bee]

bravo, this one was so eloquently written and brings out the romantic essence of dreams. beautiful

[wordman]

thank you lola,appreciate your review

[B. Boileau]

Memories bring dreams that bring more memories. They come they go, but somehow they are always there when it comes to a loved one. An excellent tribute to a fellow writer. I really enjoyed this one and I look foward to reading the rest of your stuff.

bill

[wordman]

i thank you for the visit,

[Sami Khalil]

"Dreams may come
and dreams may go
like the beauty
of our first snow"

[wordman]

thank you sammi ! appreciate the visit

[Sami Khalil]

:)))))))).............

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Any story or poem about dreams to me is just thrilling. And this poem captures the essence of dreams, coming and going as they please to satisfy our pain and joy with ease. Good one Wordman

[wordman]

thank you my friend

[Woody]

wonderfully romantic. tender and so moving. beautiful dreams stay with us for ever to cherish and revisit.

[wordman]

thank you woody !

[mou]

dreams come and go but always left a pleasure to the heart, very nice poem..

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Gee]

Memories,photos,doesn't seem much for a life lived,then both fade with passing time.Enjoyed this WM

[wordman]

thank you gee !

[wordman]

thank you gee !

[Zoli Fern]

I like this poem! It lovingly captures dreams.
My only two comments: in "another place/another time/ dreams come..." the phrase "dreams come" feels a syllable too short. Maybe "dreams do come" would work better? And #2, since it is a short poem, maybe try not to use "reminisce" twice.
Otherwise, great job!

[wordman]

and I thank you for the comment and the schooling !

[Zoli Fern]

You're welcome. I can't get away from the editing nit-picking side! ;)

[wordman]

I forgive you

[Insight "MH"]

Sometimes dreams stay in memory whether they were, good or bad. Lovely poem!

Insight.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit!

[Insight "MH"]

You're welcome.