Dreams

Dreams may come

and dreams may go

like the beauty

of our first snow

They cover our minds

with tender bliss

as our hearts reminisce

Another place

another time

dreams come

from the portals of our minds

To people and places

we reminisce

and the loved ones

that we miss

Dreams may come

and dreams may go

like the beauty

of our first snow...

inspired by valentine ,and the dreams

of her late husband. 

Reviews

[silverwritinggoddess]

So beautiful and sweet! Well done here!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[W R Stowe]

Very poetic Word,Valentine had inspired me often after reading her writes

Bill

[wordman]

good to see you bill ! thanks

[W R Stowe]

Your quite welcome but time is limited due to work

Bill

[Miss Sharon]

Beautifully written Ron. I am one who likes reading poems that rhyme. Back in the "Dark Ages" when I was first introduced to poetry, that is about all that was written. You do it well. I like this write very much. Have a Happy Thanksgiving my friend. ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon,and you too. i have always wrote like this,no idea where it came from
have to be careful,to much sounds corny,not enough sounds kinda off

[Valentine]

Whew Ron...you stunned me with this write. Made me cry. Thank you...and it goes into my favorites. Thank you again. Valentine

[wordman]

i knew you would cry,thank you for reading !

[wordman]

hell,i teared up a little too!

[Hiroshi Masters]

Great poem my friend I love this poem and great flow of words :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Weeping willow]

Wonderful write,I love the feeling of it,the way the words flow.Gives a dreamy feeling to you as you read the words;}

[wordman]

thank you weeping willow for the review

[Tiana]

Beautifully written, Ron ... Our loved ones may be gone but never forgotten. Forever in our hearts ...

[wordman]

thank you tiana,and yes they do

[Pryde Foltz]

A really pretty piece, Ron. It calls for a mug of cocoa and roaring fire to go with. Exquisite.

[wordman]

thank you pryde,and the fire and cocoa sounds inviting !

[ms. barrie]

lovely poem, very dreamy, enjoy the flow of this...keep writing :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome...apologies for delayed comments...trying to pen new writes

[wordman]

i don`t get excited ,i don`t send rr`s i just go with the flow

[ms. barrie]

Likewise...........

[wordman]

but i saw that you put it in your reading file

[ms. barrie]

writes I plan on 're visiting/commenting on after their ink has sunk in for a bit,
and when I can squeeze out a new scribble...that's all (:

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Ron this is beautiful. I love dreaming. It's like time traveling into different dimensions. We get to go back, we get to go forward, and we get to wake up from the bad ones. To bad we can't wake up when we're awake lol

[wordman]

thank you lynn,i commented on valentines poem,dreams she kept after me to turn it into a poem,so here it is