With Out You

These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...

Reviews

[♛ Monet Madden &#..]

Strong and wise words. Good work!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Kitty]

I really like this. captures love fully

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[augustus]

Very nice and it certainly evokes memories of bygone romances!

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[Pryde Foltz]

Touching and lovely, Ron. I really enjoyed your words on this early Thursday morning:)

[wordman]

thanks for the visit pryde

[Rye]

...and ever so lovely write such beauty within your words.

[wordman]

thank you again

[Sikandar Khan]

I Can't Explain My After Reading Feelings In Words, Your Poetry And Its Lyrics Made My Day, And Every Line Touched My Heart Directly, "True Love Paralyzes The Mind" Is One Of The Best Line I Read About Love And Its A Bitter Truth. I Usually Don't Add Writings In My Library, I Am Here From Almost 3 Years And I Have Added Just 2 or 3 Writings Hardly In My Library But I Am Gonna Add This One, Thanks Sir For Such Lovely Representation of Love....

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[goldenscar__]

I mean.. how could we hate love with all these feelings and moods? this poem is amazing, Ron

[wordman]

thank you for reading my humble work

[Melissa Murray]

I enjoy this one very much. It's direct and heartfelt. Is this an older or newer poem for you? It seems a little different than the others, a little more unique to you. I wonder, after reading your bio, do you ever write about boxing? Or use boxing imagery...that would be interesting. Thank you.

[wordman]

thank you for the review,never wrote about boxing or used any images.i don`t remember when i wrote it,the original version is in my photo section, it was a cpl years at least..i post everything i write on post poems ,it gives the date

[Stacy Purvis]

Oh, wow...what woman wouldn’t want a charming man to write an “ode” to her and memories of her resilient beauty? Bravo, mister. Bravo! 👏🏼

[wordman]

thank you for the visit