Bitter Sweet Memories

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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...

© 2017 wordman

Reviews

[apennylate]

Hope stews in a melting pot... Peace of mind lay at the end of a meeting with fate... Deeply moving, friend

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[apennylate]

Of course...

[marilyn 1225]

very hopeful a great optimistic poem with empathy towards women who have lost in love
I appreciate your tremendous sensitivity
and wish your ending were so...
thank you for a beautiful poem

[wordman]

thank you marilyn for reading (mystery woman )

[Coyote Poetry]

A realistic journey in your words my friend. We see the damage we had done and we hope we can repair. I liked the ending. Thank you wordman for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thanks my friend,appreciate your visit

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome.

[emmajoy]

There's enormous sensitivity and empathy running through your poem... a rare understanding of sincere 'how it truly is' from man of woman. Fine writing, wordman. Truth is: if love is focussed around the physical, it's peripheral, no more or less.

[wordman]

thank you em,it comes from the heart,as all real love does

[Bonnie Paige]

I love your style pictures, music and poetry. Our words are meant to move yours certainly does.

[wordman]

thank you for the nice comment bonnie

[Norah]

Your profile is full of perfect pieces that I don't know which one to pick to consider as my favourite! I really dig your style and this is amazingly written Wordman!

[wordman]

you are kind norah,i appreciate your reviews

[Mirror]

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.



But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...


Sound very confident and positive. the poem is another great piece. good work.

[wordman]

thank you mirror but i am taking it down,re post it later,thinking about leaving w/c to,been here to long
kinda in a stalemate

[Mirror]

okay, let me know when you have re-posted.