Blue Autumn

Autumn leaves,

a whisper of snow,

the warmth from the fire

as the red embers glow .

 

Night fall comes

in shades of gray and black

not a star shining

as the clouds push them back

 

I reminess

as the day goes by

our love reminds me

of the colors of the sky

 

Gray and black

not a star in sight

i knew our love was over

this very night ...

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Nice feeling to this poem, with a sort of punch at the end; darkness of love, as is the sky. vivid descriptions of seasonal nature. Nice Write.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit betty

[Betty Hermelee]

You are quite welcome!

[Kent Rawski]

Love how you portray nature intertwining it with your emotions left for us to interpret nice creative emotive flowing work

[Pryde Foltz]

A very beautiful write, Ron:)

[wordman]

thanks for the visit pryde

[RuseInex]

pain comes in many forms and this one is beautiful

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[RuseInex]

you're welcome, an' thank you too

[Dave Brown]

I really like the way this was written
An unfortunate ending but a very nicely written, easy to read, flowing piece
Dave B

[wordman]

thank you for the visit dave

[Fay Slimm]

A poignant feel to this one Ron - -- sad but so graciously written and thank you.

[wordman]

thanks fay,appreciate the visit

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

such a heart tugging piece really, so nicely written and full of emotions....

[wordman]

thank you again for the reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

We are one with nature. The way a lover feels when his love falls apart is similar in some way or the other to an autumn night, dark and cold.

"not a star in sight"

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us.

Never stop writing!
~Aysha.

[wordman]

thank you for the kind review

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Blue Autumn'
wordman,
You've given a gracious and calm transition between what was and what is. Life is like that I think. No guarantees. But the desire to find good somehow is seen in your writing. Inspiring and gracious!
Kathy

[wordman]

thank you for the visit kathy

[Kathy Van Kurin]

It's always nice to come by a say hi!

[wordman]

and it`s always nice to see you

[Kathy Van Kurin]

What's your weather?

[wordman]

75 degrees here today,cloudy and windy

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Nice...we are having cold and snow in a day.

[wordman]

45 now,low 32 tonight 75 yesterday crazy weather

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Crisp, flowing and sad, rhyming poem Ron!

[wordman]

thanks john,,,,,,,,,,,,