candle in the wind

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you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...

© 2018 wordman

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[Alexcat]

Your writing is musical! very enjoyable, thank you

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Shelley Warner]

I like that your titles come from great songs. Elton John sang about Princess Dianna being a candle in the wind. Your poem expresses tender and wonderful love. I was surprised to find love again after losing my husband. Your poem expresses what I feel for him.

[wordman]

i am happy for you, and thank you

[Susan 🦋]

Aw ..such a love story!!! Dreams coming true...with a I love you! :-) Nice!

[wordman]

thank you susan

[Jess]

I truly enjoyed this write! To feel love that burns hot and bright is the goal of most. Well done!

[wordman]

thank you jess

[Ladysue]

oh when love burns this bright there is no parting. Truly beautiful sentiments in this lovely write.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit ladysue

[Cassie]

Ehh!!!! Sigh!! This words are very deep, I feel the love in each verse

[wordman]

thank you,about time you came around,,lol

[Diane]

My first thought was the song, Candle In The Wind by Elton John.
I bet you keep a notebook, or your phone with you at all times to take notes for the poems your mind puts together. I am not a romance, but with age, they are starting to change my mind. This poem is very sweet. I very much enjoyed reading all of them so far.

[wordman]

they just come usually and i ad music

[wordman]

thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[augustus]

How romantic can you get? A poetic commitment if I ever saw one! Well written.

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[♛ Monet Madden &#..]

It's a perfect love poem. Easy to understand.

Thanks!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Unspoken poet]

Oh WOW!! This is just so very lovely, So beautiful

[wordman]

thank you,sorry for the late thank you my monitor went out

[Unspoken poet]

my server went down for a long time, so i understand.