candle in the wind

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you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...

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[¿]

Shuuuoooo....the wind!
It's like you've said it and just said it......weight went off from the heart and replaced with true love😇
🔥Lovely read...thank you!...for sharing :)

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[¿]

You're welcome!
Now tell me the code of inserting animated piece in writing (like the candle here)...please☺

[wordman]

just paste it in

[¿]

Lemme try...thanks :)

[wordman]

you`re welcome,you can paste anywhere in your poem

[¿]

Yay!! Made it in my profile...bigg thank ya😊

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[angel]

A sweet and beautiful sentiment; I hope you have found such love.
I will offer one other comment, knowing that we are all here to improve our writing. The word your is used to denote possession, as in your hat; in the case of assigning an object or attribute to another person you want to use YOU'RE.
meaning 'you are'. The apostrophe, you see, replaces the A in the word ARE,which of course is understood. Just me being picky, but learning English rules like this will improve your writing. You're very sensitive, I can tell, and I really was impressed by your candle picture.

[wordman]

thank you very much,i have fixed that 3 times today,it keeps going back

[wordman]

and i did it again

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words and a amazing video. Love is our best days. I liked the complete poem my friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thank you john

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Delmar Cooper]

“Some writers are confused by you're and your. A mistake involving these constitutes a grammatical howler. You're is a contraction of you are. It has no other uses. This is a 100% rule. If you cannot expand it to you are in your sentence, then it is wrong. Your is a possessive adjective. (Other possessive adjectives are my, your, his, her, its, our, and their.)”

www.grammar-monster.com

[wordman]

thank you monster

[LouisianaBird]

Well well well! Look who has found his own, "true love". This is amazing. You just need to make sure you change "your" to "you're". This is too sweet and genuine to have a grammatical error weighing it down.

[wordman]

thank you,and i will

[Weeping willow]

Beautiful expression ;-] Enjoyed the read.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit