Hand n Hand

 

Hold me close

hold me tight

let`s never be alone

especially at night

 

be with me

forever and a day

promise me

you`ll alway`s stay

 

say you need me

say you alway`s will

tell me baby

just how you feel

 

lets walk through

life hand in hand

pull me up close

tell me i`m your man

 

say you will alway`s love me

and i will alway`s be your man

as we take on this life

hand in hand...

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

Who needs ten dollar words when the beauty of love shines through as it does in this beautiful write! ~Sharon

[wordman]

hey sharon,thanks for the visit

[Akshay Rawal]

I marvel at how simple you keep your words, it doesn't look very ostentatious and unnecessarily pompous, which I am guilty of sometimes, and this profound perceptibility is what makes it pierce through the heart. They just pass through into your mind and no linguistic filter acts to interpret what is just being said, like there's no filter when we perceive honesty. Great work, friend :)

[wordman]

thank you,i write poetry like a song,no ten dollar words

[Anastasia]

Rhyming love poetry is always something that I look forward to reading and here is an example of that kind of poetry. Simply it flows to its conclusion of commitment hand in hand and they move happily towards a golden sunset. While this is the ideal kind of love and not always possible, we all can taste a bit of that dream in your poetry here. So keep it up.

[wordman]

thank you sabrina for the visit

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautifully written. I like the endearment in tour words and the repetition. Tyfs

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Insight "MH"]

Nice, this is a love song for sure, I really love it.

[wordman]

thank you for dropping by

[Insight "MH"]

My pleasure!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This reads like a love song with its romantic rhyming flavours. Love the song and the picture as well Ron!

[wordman]

thank you john

[Inessa]

I agree with Ladysue....it's very lyrical, with your heart pinned to your sleeve and making your wishes and hopes well known. Hopefully she takes your hand. Lovely words, Wordman.

[wordman]

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Ladysue]

This has the makings of a song. That is how it read to me like music. The words were so beautiful. enjoyed the read..

[wordman]

thank you for the visit