Stardust Sickness

2 a.m. I'm still awake

Every time I think my mind goes blank

It seems I was out for longer than expected

Now my head is filled with Stardust it collected

I suppose it's my own stupid fault

For dropping my things and coming to a hault

Then looking up at the sky up above

Now I can't stop I think I'm falling in love

But a girl like me? I have no business

Being caught in this stardust sickness.

Reviews

[Gee]

Enjoyed this....ever tried counting sheep???

[WordShaker33]

I prefer to count the stars. Hahaha.

[Gee]

Much prettier,but saying that I have seen attractive sheep!!!!

[Captain Rilen]

I find it funny that I'm reading this at 2am. Loved the ending and the rhymes embedded into it. I found it to be quite relatable too :)

[WordShaker33]

Hahaha that is funny. I'm often up until at least 3 a.m. Because I am too busy stargazing, thinking, writing, and basically letting my mind run wild in a rampage of thoughts and ideas. Then when I try to bring myself back from reality, I am unable to do so. Hahaha. I guess you could say I'm a helpless day dreamer.

[Stan Lee]

2am i'm still awake... lol.. I can so relate to that...and everything being my own stupid fault too... :D
Great poem! :)

[WordShaker33]

Hahaha, I'm sure most writers could relate:) But I was up until 2a.m. today and this thought of a poem popped into my head and I thought, why not?

[Adam Adams]

You make me chuckle!

A very refreshing poetry you're bled within. The words you've cracked on the page seem to be directly and perfectly belonged to your spirit. I guess, sometimes.. staying up late nights's all what makes heart more deeper & deeper for.. in... words. Your emotions're being there... in this piece! Great work!

[WordShaker33]

Thank you I'm glad you thought the poem was entertaining. Often times I'm not able to sleep because I'd so much rather be outside looking at stars. But there are things I need to do that never get done becuase I have a bad case of the stardust sickness. :) thanks for the review.

[Adam Adams]

So means, you dealing with insomnia. Well, that's pretty good. Get yourself some coffee & a great pad of notebook. Sit down there - yes, right there under the galaxy of stars. Keep looking at 'em & the next moment, let your pen wave ov'r the empty-slate of yous. I'm pretty sure, you're gonna get a new poetry.. with another scheme of entertainment. Good luck! I'll be around your pages.. in 'bout no time. Kinda like your rhythmic pattern!

[WordShaker33]

Thanks ill be sure to follow your advice. Thanks for the review. :)