New Sense

Different Views

I can see the camera flashing
Over the hill
Under the water
I can see a camera flashing

I can see a camera flashing
Under the water
Over the hill
I can see the camera flashing

I can see my camera flashing
Under the hill
Over the water
I can see their camera flashing

I can see their camera flashing
Over the water
Under the hill
I can feel my camera transitioning

- Keith Allen Covell

Author's Note

I am not a robot.
I am unorthodox.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

creativity is within our own souls...deep within.
i think about plagiarism when i read this...others photographing and then stealing and using our thoughts...following us around if they seem to have no inspiration of their own...
that is where this took me.
the reverse repetition works well.
j.

[Keith Allen Covell]

That is a cool way of looking at this. :) Most of my work has multiple meanings, as I intend.

[emipoemi]

This is profound and abstract in poetically pleasing ways. This is poetry in motion. Well done!

[Keith Allen Covell]

Dude, thanks. :)

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[Unspoken poet]

this is really deep and quite intriguing, I enjoyed this write.

[Keith Allen Covell]

Thank you so much!

[Unspoken poet]

not a problem

[Keith Allen Covell]

These words are for your ears to see and your eyes to hear. Don't confuse normality with commonality. Don't judge a book by its cover. Be quick to turn your lights off when the strangers come to contort. Don't let them steal any sense of creativity. Be who you want to be. Don't let them make you feel like you're not good enough or that you're doing it wrong. Focus on your will to create and not their commonalities.