Love

Love

Oh, love:

The heart's way of making one feel special,

Love:

The man's way of hurting, inflicting pain,

The simple ways of speaking, smiling,

Oh, love:

The soul does not know what to do

Loving so, oh so much

Not knowing the pain -

The harsh pain that comes

Along, with a man

So in trust with his instincts, that

He not knows the consequences, of the

Woman's mind.

She knows of what to do,

Leave.  Just leave him be

Before the heart gets a hold of more than

It should.

Reviews

[Ian]

"Love:
The man's way of hurting, inflicting pain"

It's sad to hear that's what you think about love... talking about men... but yeah you're right... sadly (-_-)
And I know what you mean... but not all the men are this way (I know this is an overused phrase, haha) I'm not this way... but I always wonder WHY DO GIRLS GO OUT WITH IDIOTS?!... they don't care if they use them... and I hate to see that... I hate this... why do girls want to be hurt? I just don't know... it's sad...
And I hate all those guys who do that... They are crap... and that's why lots of girls think this way... But I can't blame you because you're right.

[Linda.]

HAHAHHAHAHA @ JOANNA.

[prettypinkshoes]

...is this suggesting lesbianism ?



LOL

[Life Calling!!!]

Hmm.....love is beatiful....but love is painful too, and I agree completely with you! And some of the lines ring so true....I just love them!!!

"Love:
The man's way of hurting, inflicting pain,"

"Loving so, oh so much
Not knowing the pain -
The harsh pain that comes"

And, the end is so perfect!
"Before the heart gets a hold of more than
It should"........simply mind-boggling! Love it!

God Bless!

[Ryan Heisel]

that poem was amazing
'before the heart gets a hold of more than it should'
brilliant line

[barricade]

the downside to love or shall i say the aftermath of falling in love...well depicted...the hurting, the pain that love tends to bring with itself more often than not...

well written...

regards
barricade...

[Vaishali..^_^]

ohh beautiful...lovely piece...i liked it
especially
Oh, love:
The soul does not know what to do
Loving so, oh so much
Not knowing the pain -
The harsh pain that comes...
great work...!

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

very lovely! i like thisx0x0x0