Runaway, Rabbit Love

some lovers must run in order to survive or risk eternal seperation. love shall conquer all....

 

My love, please follow

We must hurry, prey

Make haste!

For the King has begged us distaste

 

Our friends have turned,

Our allies shifted

To the enemies we once loathed

 

When hunters become rabbits

And the weak rise to power

We must abandon our endeavors

And fight for survival

 

But love will rise

Just you and just me

Because this love

No matter what

 

Is meant to be

Believe….

 

Please  

Author's Note

love is like a garden - if someone tries to ravage it, put your walls forward. then behind these you can make your escape

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Your style again switched part way but Its a good signature. I like the overall style and the flow you put behind the poem itself. No closure with this one, but a moment of weakness, I think that is what made this poem for me, was the moment of doubt. Well done.

[DanaRegen]

beatiful poem, it was lovely, it started out nicely and continued to rise and flow well, i dont know what to say other than keep on writing, and good job!

[Wildecat]

A wonderful poem, a definite pleasure to read your poetry.